Sunday, October 19, 2008

# Slowly Winter Sets In... Comments

Rating: 3.2

It’s the onset of long awaited winter,
There is a slight nip in the air.
I hear the sound of bird’s twitter
Flitting about the trees without a care.
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Mamta Agarwal
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Nikunj Sharma 13 August 2009

its been sometime, since I felt the nip held my ginger tea cup, and took a sip its been sometime since I saw the fog and felt its cool in me all of this and much more your poem reminded me............

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Marilyn Lott 30 October 2008

A very enjoyable poem. I like the line - 'enjoy a few things that make me, me.' We all need to do that, don't we? So often we get so busy we forget to just relax and enjoy ourselves and be who we are. Loved this poem, Mamta! A '10+! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Bob Blackwell 25 October 2008

I like your description of lazing in a hammock....ah total bliss. Those grey cold days of winter, a longing for the sun to warm our backs. Winter for me isnt so bad anymore after I decided to live from moment to moment and not to attach them as they tick by. I can see like me you have a love of nature....now thats also bliss. Bob

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Ashraful Musaddeq 21 October 2008

Amazing. Nicely composed winter. 10 for it.

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Raj Nandy 20 October 2008

I too am feeling the morning nip for the last two days! Your poem brings out the beauty of the changing season along with your inner thougths gracefully. Happy composing! - Raj Nandy

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Anjali Sinha 19 October 2008

lovely feelings of winter setting in-- though for me its summer setting in- whatever, i can feel the beauty of your winter through your poem. nice write ++++++10 as always love anju (do read mine Priyatma)

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Sandra Fowler 19 October 2008

The music of winter, the pleasure of pure contentment. Lovely poem. Sending you a frost picture from my part of the world. Love, SandraX

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