Slowly Move Her Feet Comments

Nothing is ordinary about your superb use of simile and metaphor to describe your poetic visions of romance. You paint glamor and mystery into the everyday events of life. This is the mark of an exceptional poet. Always your friend, Sandra

Stunning imagery here and to slowly move her feet is something desired so much. A sophisticated and original poem! 10 love Karin

Wow, I'm carried away on this suave love song of a vision of a lady..(smile)

Fearfully pale Like the milk-white moon, His body trembles Like a chandelier In an earthquake At meeting the lady........................ still he trembles as sees once again mystery yet jingles over grace of milk-white moon, fantastic imagery of a meeting blue redounding to beauty og grace, yet wrought ingenious by luscious glow,10+++, thanks for sharing