Slowly i die
Each breath i take
I pray will be my last
Depression has hit
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Somehow, I feel you wrote this from inside. I like it, Sunitria. Simple and sad. Anything written from inside is a masterpiece. I don't like rating 'art' because everyone has their opinion. But I liked this. Can't say for the billions other in the world. - K.J.
a very meaningful poem. good piece.