Monday, January 26, 2009

Slowly Drifting Away Comments

Rating: 5.0

I ask you with searching eyes what you would do
If one day true love had decided to give up on you
Would you write your true love a love letter
To somehow try to make things a little better
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Yassar Ali
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Greenwolfe 1962 06 February 2009

Some good rhyming lines and an interesting story make this very readable. It seems that it is another love tragedy. Common, but each one varies a little. GW62

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sumaira .....ir 26 January 2009

K... Dear if my lov 1 giv ups thn it's his bad luck i'll mak him go nd find another lucky 1 :) ... Lovely poem i really really enjoyed... A sentimental love poem... +10 4 u wit gud luck hop tht u find right 1 soon

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