Slowed Revelation Poem by Richard Wlodarski

Slowed Revelation

Rating: 5.0


I awaken and see the light
Not knowing what is bright
I smell the freshness of the day
Surprised at what's to my dismay

I wash up and scrub my face
Facing up to life's disgrace
Trying so very hard to win defeat
In such solemn time when I should retreat

I rest in the noon of sunny day
Fretful of the awful come-what-may
Wishin' I were in another place
In my dyin' space of disgrace

I sleep in the howlin' wolf's moon
Darkest of dreams coming too soon
Resurrecting and killing of my life
Acknowledging all of my damn life's strife

Saturday, May 19, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: apathy,depression,life,lifestyle
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Kerouac Series
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carl Roussell 20 May 2018

So much emptiness expressed here.

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Kerouac had much more than life's fair share of emptiness. And it was killing him!

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Manonton Dalan 19 May 2018

very beautiful rhyming thanks

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Thank you so much for reading and for your very positive response!

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