Thursday, April 24, 2008

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im going way to fast speed racer im making him look bad
what am i doing i have to slow down befor i go to fast and
lose the one im really crazy about what am i doing going
at the currents pase or my own its crazy cuz im not sure
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david bailey
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Pamela Lutwyche 12 September 2008

Hi David, You don’t want to lose anything. Have a look at my poem (slow down) see what you think mate.

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