*slow The Love Comments

beautiful write, A true talent lurks behind these words

I enjoyed the play of words and the search for the lover.. good work.

*** SLOW THE LOVE *** Slow the love, slow the intoxication Yes slow the love and slow the intoxication in abundance tonight the red wine flows slow and slow thy glance do bring Towards my heart-the holiest of places Drunk have I, from the goblet rusted, . red wine of your love that floweth. When in flamboyance thou enter the city of love, unveil thy love, to this thy princess in the Garden of Eden’s Paradise, sans ambulations and rituals. Slow the love slow the intoxication. Traversed have I, deserts of solitude oasis of honey my embrace, In taverns of yore For the old woman’s blessings In her hands I seek, the knowledge of the vedas unveiled, to ask for advice for lost I say is my heart to this pilgrim unkown Seek, oh let me seek thy glance, a bit of it Anoint me with the musk of the oil That flows from the depths of your heart, In poems and in sweet verses, where thou shall sing to my heart of gold. With magic of love from underneath

a very good write +++++10 anjali

beautiful write yet again sadiq..........and a superb sequel to the other two poems....iam your biggest fan ever...........

Wow! Wonderfully write... Different moods of hidden lov shown in a very senseible way... Powerful words! +10 4 u dear...

The journey to the enchanting holiest of places, my song still alive on her lips, tranquilled by the glitters on the princess's face, slow the love, cuz love is in redundance tonite.Beautiful and enchanting verses Sadiqullah!

Absolutly beautiful Sadiqullah...lovely to read with it's slow flow of words...thank you...Fi