*slow The Love (Serpent Of Love) Comments
The sun went down for the night to cover
The earth that lay bare in front of me
Like the face you hide for the lover to adore
The curves and lines the dusk of your beauty
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Truly classic, the serpent of love like Cleopatra...amazing composition written with great imagery, fine use of metaphors and similes...structured with thought provoking verses and a loving mood to add......A master piece of words flow like music.............10/10
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7/30/2025 12:36:42 AM # 1.0.0
I agree with Yoonoos. The only question I have is its length. I would like to see it shortened. The last stanza was a classic. This one is a real treasure to keep. GW62