Wednesday, January 28, 2009

*slow The Love (Sequels) Comments

Rating: 3.3

Hast thou seen my love many times
The morning dew or the dusk in the eve
For the lovers’ caravan to the tavern goes
Neither mosque nor temple
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Sadiqullah Khan
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 February 2009

The ring of fire............love is so much to loose.

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Lynda Robson 30 January 2009

Written from the heart, romantic and touching, thank you, 10 Lynda xx

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Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello 29 January 2009

Some Shakespeare, some Auden for this stylistically faultless poem.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 29 January 2009

i think it is sequel to Anjali's poem Wonderful sequel to wonderful poem great write.......... thanks for sharing

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sumaira .....ir 29 January 2009

It has philosophical touch... Another classi poem... I think your words r clear nd powerful bt ppl like me take at lest 1 whole day 2 understand your poems.. +10

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Sreelekha Premjit 29 January 2009

Loved your poem. What a lovely picturisation of love! ! ! !

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C. P. Sharma 29 January 2009

Love poetry attains commanding heights in the love sequals of you two. If love be the food of life, go on....................... CP

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Anjali Sinha 29 January 2009

WOWWWW so beautiful! ! ! ! ! let the enemies of love burn in their own hate A master craftsman you are Sadiq You have painted this canvas with golden colours straignt from thy heart and water you have used my tears to lighten the shades A++++and many 10ssssss Anjali

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Joseph Poewhit 29 January 2009

Gives a dignity to love, that many shun away today, in the quest for image love.

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Ency Bearis 29 January 2009

Enchanting poem..a classical passionate write..nice flow and to read..10

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beautiful piece. very shakespearean

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beautiful piece. very shakespearean

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Catrina Heart 29 January 2009

You are doing sequels as a song of love with the theme slow the love and a touch of a bit of the moth and flame...where all speaks of love as a romantic mood...You are gifted to the flow and use of words, truly classic....written in a free verse form though presented in an ageless structure...10+++++++

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