Saturday, January 31, 2009

*slow The Love (Life Galore) Encore I Comments

Rating: 3.1

The brilliance of the skies
On thy look back to the city
When the beloved in benediction
Who told her that the lover
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Sadiqullah Khan
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Catrina Heart 03 February 2009

You always amaze me with your poetic skills in doing different editions or say chapters of Slow The Love.. How I wish I could write like you sir....You have a very unique mind and have a point of origin...so different from the edited or revised unclaimed to be one.....yet.....1000+++++++

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Anjali Sinha 02 February 2009

Sadiq is the best love poet here A++ and 10++

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Anjali Sinha 02 February 2009

ENCORE-Slow the love When I look back at the city of love we never did part the brilliance of the skies with joy on my face not half broken, not half hearted I shall sing that song of eternity in love, not to sever for years. Chills blew across my face and warmer were your kisses for separation was not my destiny the songs in tears rolled down my cheeks, though the heart be still as loving and the moon be still so glowing. Memories mine shall float in my heart like casks of treasures in my chest My humble prostrations on this nigrescent earth like the matinal dew on the viridescent blades of grass shall not remain like a chill on my brow. The vows made together, Renewed now with every beat of my heart drops another tear I cry, like the low winds moan but in my silence I am not alone On lips of gentry when thy horse of wings descended on this city of love in cheers and in celebrations when I hear thy name spoken a light has descended a Paradise on earth Where lifes galore the songs of love understandth doth I. All the signs of this vision. when in secrets we meet in silence I smile That while I kneel in benediction with a smiling heart sit listening to that angel that raga of devotion with stars in my eyes I see you. Yes slow the love Lifes galore Encore Once more Anjali 01-02-2009

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