Slow the love,
slow the intoxication
Yes slow the love
and slow the intoxication
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Carminative for illusioned. Purgative of vices. Soul’s emollient! Ten++ dr. sakti Thanks for comments and rating and expecting the same on my poems if you please.
your words seems to be magic and has some divine power indeed..thanks my dear angelic friend....nice refreshment for the sore heart..or sore throat i should say..A++++
Shimmering sensibility Sensational symphony Slow steadiness Sinclair synchronisation..... A squander of 10 but i somehow like it.
deep feelings in your poem really fantastic 10++++++++++++++++++++
An oriental set rich in sweet-smelling wine expresses a feeling of extenuation.
A rdent love n ow intoxicates j oyous moments a rrested this heart l et it be mine i n slow motion!
so romantic...deep...deep love emerge in your deep, deep words.... another heart-striking write...... to make anybody's heart absorb your words and fell in love....10++
nice flow and love is so deep fom inert, well expressed with a deep feeling, I love this poem very much.
This work flows so freely and takes me to another time and place. Your thirst for knowledge is beautiful and the theme of slow is a such a divine way to quench your thirst. Wonderful! Karin Anderson
slow the love.......no way.... voom voom....high gear you are 10sssssssss
For sweet angel like you Many whispers I have The ruggedness of my hands Slowly on your neck To the ears and a caress Into those beautiful hairs Not lashes of eyes but like ocean Black and deep I want to drown Your red lips quiver for my kiss In my chest as you hide The tender face of a child I feel your tears Travel down on my bust A moment’s desire so seraphic Will you forget that my love
This poem is amazingly beautiful...................................................................... 10+++++++
A sweet plea to change the gear, to slow down the transition setting of love and passion maneuvering from the whirlwind magical touch, from the blinding turnado of heart....elegant composition as always...10
Anoint me with the musk of the oil That flows from the depths of your heart, In poems and in sweet verses, where thou shall sing to my heart of gold. With magic of love from underneath. The lines that touches and excites to the optimum point. Thanks for the nice poem.