I look up
as a tear rolls slowly
down my cheek
I think about better days
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It invokes the feeling every guy feels when he is unable to help the one he loves yet he is still there for her. No matter what he will be there yet he wishes at that moment he could help her. It was quite an enjoyable read. You have talent. Keep writing
Oh my..... I really loved this. It is a master piece! Keep writing.
I love it.: O And for all who read this, lay off my use of emoticons. It had inspiration, it had talent. And you, are the pinnacle of that talent. I admire you. Even if your poetry isn't that long, it's beautiful and unsettling. And I mean that in a good way. And trust me, I don't usually like short poetry. That's why I write long. Thank God for your talent. For He is the reason we have it. :)