Thursday, December 16, 2004

Slow Seduction Silent Night Comments

Rating: 4.8

Slow seduction silent night
Barely breathing burning bright
Closer closer touch feel hold
Power passion burnished gold
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David Keig
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Ivan Donn Carswell 05 December 2006

This I can relate to, it is perhaps who or what your poetic pretences allows you to reveal. I am amazed (without having read more than a dozen or so of your posts) that no-one other than Herbert Nehrlich & I see it!

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Herbert Nehrlich1 17 December 2004

The barely breathing must be your secret, I always need extra Oxygen. Poem is very likeable. H

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