Monday, October 1, 2007

@~}~~ Slow Ride ~~{~@ Comments

Rating: 4.6

Slowly, I pull your body close to mine
Releasing your clothing, we begin to entwine
Feeling your heart, begin to race, with every gentle touch,
Needing, wanting, desiring each other so much
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Julie Dant 02 August 2008

Woah. What a sensual, yet tasteful, piece of poetry! Once you begin the read, you are swept up with the happenings there in the moonlight. We can all relate to such passion, I'm sure. A '10' for sure! Julie

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Shelley L Baxter-stanley 16 January 2008

gREAT TITLE THAT draws the reader in.I like this passionate poem! Keep up the Great work.............Poison U write well! ((smile)) Shelley

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x... x... 14 October 2007

A passionate poem written tastefully yet ever so full of fire...As Tara says, this works, Oh yeh, it really works............marci. :)

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I feel the need to choose my words carefully ;) . So I'll simply say... this works. t x

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Amanduh Zallarrr 05 October 2007

incredible imagery.. and the sensuality is striking. thank you, poison. ♥ frozenbeauty

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