Saturday, November 21, 2009

Slow Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

Stuck in here
With a heart
That is broken
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Monica Rose
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you wrote it all really fine..but you made a mistake in the last line.. giving one's heart to someone else is a beautiful mistake, and beautiful was missing i felt. keep it up dear. :)

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Joseph Poewhit 21 November 2009

Real outpouring of feelings in few words

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