you wrote it all really fine..but you made a mistake in the last line.. giving one's heart to someone else is a beautiful mistake, and beautiful was missing i felt. keep it up dear. :)
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you wrote it all really fine..but you made a mistake in the last line.. giving one's heart to someone else is a beautiful mistake, and beautiful was missing i felt. keep it up dear. :)