Monday, February 1, 2010

“slow Down, Sir” Comments

Rating: 5.0

When’s my time up?
I do not know.
But I refuse to move
With the worlds fast flow.
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James Grayson
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Ellery Lim 01 March 2010

are u really taking things slowly or just trying to show how the world is advancing. cause it can work for and against you through this poem.

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Katellyne Baker 07 February 2010

great one, i really like the originality in this writing, how everyones moving, passing their life hurrying to get things over with, but you on the other hand is taking things slow because your in no rush to death.

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