Monday, April 6, 2015

Slow Down; Get Ready; Go! ..... [medical Intervention; Aging Humans; Death; Short; Inspired By S. Katona Poem] Comments

Rating: 5.0

People are not meant to live soooo long,
and “Don't think each day can be a song! ”
Why I'll BET in that guy’s or gal's 102 years,
medicine has come to ‘wipe away tears’.
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Bri Edwards
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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 February 2018

I like this poem though I have a different stance! I should consciously think of my good health to make my lives comfortable through healthy food, yoga and exercises (say no to all the medicines and sophisticated treatments) ...I take this as the view of my own life may be my philosophy is little different from what you prescribe in you poem!

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Valsa George 23 January 2018

Most of the people love to live long! Though Bri claims that he prefers to die young to becoming an octogenarian, I am sure he will cling onto life if he gets a chance! Thanks to medical intervention in arresting death at least for sometime! (this time I have caught you for a typo....! ! Instead of 'block', you have used 'bloke' or did you use it to mean 'a weary man? !

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