Sunday, December 7, 2008

Slow Down, Baby Comments

Rating: 5.0

I don't know why you smiling,
In this shining morning,
Then you ask me for drinking,
And both of us order Darjeeling,
...
Read full text

Kaede Rirunaru
COMMENTS
Ahmad Shiddiqi 09 December 2008

love is a river. I like this words! keep writing!

0 0 Reply
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 09 December 2008

Love is passion; touchin, kissin and makin love are components of love.there's nothin wrong with it.Nice writes Naru.

0 0 Reply
Kite Remedy 09 December 2008

yeah, you're right. love is not an instant thing, but more a flower whose petals will bloom in a period of time. patience is the very key. good write..

0 0 Reply

Kaede Yes, that's what is all about, getting to know the person otherwise a relationship is empty. You really did well with the title and what followed. Excellent! Karin Anderson

0 0 Reply
Aijaz Asif 09 December 2008

another lovely write from you dear....as far as i believe, love is not the name of taking....its giving, waiting, hurting, yearning.....thanks for sharing 10+++ 'when she comes the birds and flowers will sing a song when she comes the clouds and skies will drizzle love all around when, when, when someday or maybe never'-asif rgds asif

0 0 Reply
Min Sia 08 December 2008

Yes..exactly..perfectly address my dearest friend..empathizing.. Let him read this wonderful poem..for this is the reality of ladies..men should come to discover! A 10+++! ! !

0 0 Reply
Kaede Rirunaru

Kaede Rirunaru

Surabaya, Indonesia
Close
Error Success