Slow Dancers Poem by Evelyn Judy Buehler

Slow Dancers

Rating: 5.0


In shadows of blue
clouds slow dance across the skies
Tender sunlight dream
follows mute, chronic drifters
round and round the blooming world

O'er shady forests
desert flowers and green seas
blithe homes and fast cars
Greeting fields of lavender
and redbirds of tomorrow

Slow Dancers
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is in the tanka form. Photo by Ana_I at Pixabay
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 17 September 2022

Beautiful. Loved this fabulous poem....Top score!

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Nosheen Irfan 17 September 2022

Simply sublime! Made my day! A great read to start my day with!

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Richard Wlodarski 16 September 2022

Evelyn, you've brilliantly captured the majestic and magical beauty of clouds. Beautiful work.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 16 September 2022

Thank you, Richard. Your words thrill and delight.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 September 2022

What a unique painting of the true wonders of nature. Very inspiring and refreshing write. Top Marks as always.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 16 September 2022

Thank you for inspiring me with your kind remarks.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 14 September 2022

Very romantic Evelyn

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 16 September 2022

You have my very deep thanks, LeeAnn.

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