** Slow And Slow *** Poem by ANJALI SINHA

** Slow And Slow ***

Rating: 4.7


Sans rituals
slipped the costume
down the mounds,
silk and the zephyr
lit the fire of love
with the vintage wine,
for another night
in the nest of love

she gave in at last
slow slow the visions show
to the depth of your love
amidst the tinkle of music
for eternal breath
in the open skies

Anjali
22-01-2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mystic Indian 06 August 2009

a deep pranayam of sorts - 10/10

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Sanjib Das 19 July 2009

Lovely nice poem. I express it through this: Love really comes in a slow manner, I am your ardent admirer.

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sweet lovely poem...

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Sejal Kapadia 30 June 2009

she gave in at last slow slow the visions show to the depth of your love ///love is suchbeautiful thing.. good one i like it

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Nikunj Sharma 26 June 2009

Eternally romantic poem n poetess...u hv an uncanny knack of swayin people of their feet

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Rahul Aithal 04 August 2010

Very touchy. Keep writing, Anjali. Rahul.

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Boom Tish 05 April 2010

Very beautiful work.

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Joan Joseph 06 March 2010

I really enjoy this poem. It is super.

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Siddharth Singh 24 November 2009

Slow although, she gave in nevertheless under the open skies where the stars and the moon were witnessing the surrender. Lovely again.

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 19 November 2009

Gooooooooood one...............................

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