Dawn has remarked appearance,
Wisdom has started enlightening,
In this beginning of new day,
Dear child sun, you slither.
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This poem is so refreshing and rejuvenating to start a day welcoming the rising sun....a lovely adorable poem-10++++
Sharing rays of love with greatness is nice. Sweet flute of God produces sweet sound for learning. We feel God's love with greatest sweetness. His flute is nice. You are a nice poet and this poem is an excellent poem.
Nature maintains the beauty of creation. this poem is very beautiful. This is loved by me.
We learn to rise for God to meet, You greet us dear slithering sun. sun and god, a good poetic theme
Morning sun is considered as the child sun. Powerful imagination motivates mind with higher abode. This poem is very lovely.