Tuesday, July 27, 2010

! ! ! ! Slipping Back! ! ! ! ! Comments

Rating: 2.4

I'm slipping back,
Into the madness of the night,
Where only thoughts,
Of death can reach me,
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Kieran J1996
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Søren Valentine 20 May 2013

So, my initial thought was that this was a little melodramtic. Then I realized the emotion and it came alive to me because I've been here myself. I love how the last line summarizes things up.... Denial. Beautiful! Good job mate!

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Kevin Carney 30 July 2010

Such a sad poem. Its such a statement on tortured emmotion. Very well written been there also.

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UnKnown Messenger 28 July 2010

This poem is very intense. The 'i am cursed' part makes me a little bit sad, because no one is cursed. but from the poem and the other comment seems like we all have something in common, no matter where i guess. Solid stuff.

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Tamika Tucker 28 July 2010

awwww, that is really sad. i have felt like that before!

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