Monday, August 29, 2011

Slipping Away Comments

Rating: 5.0

We keep losing touch,
Don't let me lose you.
Feels like your slipping,
You've done slipped away.
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Adam Iron Thorn
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Rebekka Bear 29 August 2011

this is really good and you are a good writer continue to rite because when i read your writing i can understand how you feel or felt

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