Wednesday, December 8, 2021

Slip With Foot. Comments

Rating: 5.0

My affectionate wife stumbled,
fell down like a felled tree
on the concrete floor
of the garage.
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Nabakishore Dash
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Anjandev Roy 09 December 2021

Fine piece....

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 December 2021

A very lovely poem that captures the care and love of a great husband. Wonderfully written with a tinge of humor.

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David Wood 08 December 2021

You protected your wife and that is the main thing. Protect her physically and mentally too.

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Bharati Nayak 08 December 2021

A great poem with fun and humour though it centres around a stressful event.

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Nabakishore Dash 08 December 2021

Thanks to you Madam for your appreciation.

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