Friday, May 19, 2006

Slip Away Comments

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What do you do when your life is slipping away?
when so much has happpened?
And there's nothing you can say
And there's nothing yu can do
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Carrie Everett
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[[Sonia ♥ ]] 19 May 2006

...: ♥ ...: Wow. i really like that poem. its freaking awesum! <33 good job. keep ur head up! : X

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Brian Dorn 19 May 2006

Carrie, sometimes it's easier to build a shelter and not let anyone in... you certainly have less chance of getting hurt. But, isolation brings no joy and that's when life slips away. Excellent write! ! Brian

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Carrie Everett

Carrie Everett

Memphis, Tennessee
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