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From what I gather, your style is soft like opaque sunbeams and always carried in a tone of dignity. Beautiful

Beautiful Val, as always.

Soothing, mellow and full of wonderful enchantment! Beautiful write!

Another beautiful poem Valerie and a joy to read.

The tender love and the manner you have portrayed it with lovely rhyming scheme is greatly alluring, Valerie! KUDOS!

a love and feeling i hope to share with someone special one day, a beautiful poem as always

So tender is love, so smooth are your diction. Like feathers they touch my soul!

Such a beautiful poem Valerie.

You are the summer breeze that warm our smiles, a lovely write again for sure! _Soul

As beautiful as a wave cresting on the ocean.... wave after wave.....

A very lovely poem, fantasizing passionate yearning. I find it difficult to single out any particular stanza for praise as whole poem is, as it were, carved out of a single stone much like lovely figures of Ajanta Caves.

A beautiful poem, the first stanza sets it up beautifully.

What beautiful words. I particularly like verse 5, words that so many need. Great job Val. Kevin's message made me laugh.

Your poems are silky smoot. You really are a great poet

Very warm and passionate! ! Two souls conjoined as one all through eternity! Wonderful! !

journey deep in to my soul. good one. thanks.