Thursday, December 29, 2016

Slip Comments

Rating: 4.5

Warm breeze, and you're gone.
The sky goes somber
As the door slams
Before I switch the lock.
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Samantha McKinnon
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Jazib Kamalvi 06 October 2017

A good attempt in the chapter of sad love. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Samantha Mckinnon 06 October 2017

Thank you very much, I will be sure to check it out.

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