Sunday, September 9, 2007

Slight Imperfections Comments

Rating: 4.7

Restless eyes give way to the morning sun
I rise to make the morning brew
Quietly I sit on the edge till it is done
Watching your chest rise and fall, just watching you
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Patricia Gale
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Meggie Gultiano 17 September 2007

whew! wow and wow..what can i say, Pat.you're such a darling and sooo sweet..very romantic..can i call you Mrs. Romantic? hugs, Meggie

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Thad Wilk 09 September 2007

Hi Pat! very romantic poem! love it. (a 10) ! ! ! Thad

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 09 September 2007

This is just beautiful Patricia, your such a wonderful writer, looks like your man is a lucky guy...10

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There is nothing more beautiful than watching the chest of a beloved rise and fall; be it a partner, a child or an animal. That thought as expressed by you got me, in particular. I wish I had written this. Inspired, P. t x

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Geoff Warden 09 September 2007

And this being said can only show the true meaning of love and exceptance of another......well penned my good friend...

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