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i totally agree with jasjiv............ a clever one nice work my vote 10 peace jibin

i loved the start, but then it changed in the end. a killer's mind would work the same way i thought. cleverly averted.

AHHH...what a cleveruty of verse, young lady...You play the game so well....tease & please....nice work Preets! ''''''''''''''FJR

I love this. It's perfectly everyday, turned into something special!

the ending was good then i looked down and it got even better. enjoyed this

Once Eve had given the entire apple to Adam and see what had happened..... LOLz..... You are truly amazing and have a beautiful frame of mind. The simple things that you write on makes you a very special poet..... I had once said this earlier...You write like an angel!

i do...thanks...love...nalini...you forgot about the name on the ebook...LOL