Slice Your Way To Happiness Comments

Believe me, you can slice and slice, but you won't find happiness. I think you kinda know that though. To me this poem says how slicing your way to happiness is bad. I don't know if that's what you meant. But, I understand what you're writing. So much emotion.

This write convey a good message, evokes to be happy. The title is very catchy. Best Wishes. Naseer