Knees all soft and baggy
Skin all warm and clamy
with eyes half open
legs like concrete
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Nicely written. Hope you don't mind but as I was reading it I couldn't help saying 'where we meet... in our clothes we sleep.'
like the poem, you got a way of writing words like pictures, meaning i can see the point very well.........................
Great use of rhyme again... such a natural flow... I love this.. very visual! I think this is my favourate!