Friday, August 19, 2005

Slept In Clothes Comments

Rating: 5.0

Knees all soft and baggy
Skin all warm and clamy
with eyes half open
legs like concrete
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Alc Harris
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Enemacles Redux 03 September 2005

Great use of rhyme again... such a natural flow... I love this.. very visual! I think this is my favourate!

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Shelia Williams 01 September 2005

Nicely written. Hope you don't mind but as I was reading it I couldn't help saying 'where we meet... in our clothes we sleep.'

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David Gerardino 19 August 2005

like the poem, you got a way of writing words like pictures, meaning i can see the point very well.........................

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