Saturday, December 17, 2022

Sleepy Thoughts Comments

Rating: 5.0

Frosty shapes on windows rest,
Robin seeking food outside,
In my warm and cosy bed,
Beneath the covers thoughts in mind,
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Jayne Louise Davies
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Jayne Louise Davies 18 December 2022

I really appreciate your comments x Many thanks to you all x

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Nosheen Irfan 18 December 2022

Correction: The ache of the absence of a loved one is beyond seasons.

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Nosheen Irfan 18 December 2022

The sense of loss and winter chill.....they are so compatible with each other. Basically winters bring on a feeling of melancholy. But the absence of a loved one is beyond seasons I guess. Top marks!

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Rob Lamberton 17 December 2022

…and sometimes sleepless thoughts. Nice poem!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 17 December 2022

I feel the same pain inside Jayne Bravo!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 December 2022

Excellent. Beautifully penned dear poetess. Top score.

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David Wood 17 December 2022

I remember as a young boy frost on the inside of the window! ! Lovely thoughts of your loved one.

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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