Sleepy Popcorn Comments
I couldn't sleep. I was lying in bed watching the patterns reflected moonlight made on my ceiling when I heard the faint beep of the kitchen microwave. I smelled popcorn.
I decided to fill up my water bottle and see who was up. I slipped on a thick, terrycloth robe I'd gotten from Lisa last Christmas. It must weigh 15 pounds and it's so warm and heavy I seldom wear it.
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I like this poem too, but the other too, and....what that f--k word concerned, YOU are right. But I wish she has not changed her brilliant ideas for the next coming poems.
IF you asked me, Kim, I like her other story-poem too, this is a bit 'dull' to my ears, of course 'excellent' but not The Anais I know or have known.
Dear Kim, do YOU know what Anais was thinking when she read your comment here? WHICH teenager (intelligent girl) would do what YOU expect of her? Just think easy BUT intelligently, I had been such a boarding-girl too.
I love this poem. Almost makes me wish I were back in college again. Dorm life was so much fun!
Thanks - I'm loving it. I got lucky, I really like all of my suite mates. I usually do poem, poem, story - I like to try things.
Now this is the kind of delightful, fascinating, honest poem I have come to expect from you. Full of great feeling and natural dialog. Well done!
Thanks - I'm SO glad you liked it - I never know what people will like but I like telling stories the best
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8/4/2025 1:44:24 AM # 1.0.0
Your stories have such a ring of truth!