Monday, August 29, 2016

Sleepy Bear. Comments

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Oh, Sleepy bear, so much
happening and you're unaware.
The deer by the brush, stands off
and stares. As birds, bees, butterflies,
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Rebecca Navarre
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Khairul Ahsan 23 June 2017

It's so wonderful to read this beautiful poem! Liked the bear's and the squirrel's description. I wonder though- - 'The deer by the brush' - if you wanted to say 'The deer by the bush' here! May be, an erroneous extra 'r'?

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Rebecca Navarre 23 June 2017

Thank You! ! ! Khairul, For Such A Kind And Thoughtful Reply! ! ! ! ! I Was referring to like, the scrubs, brush, forest, thicket, etc.Thank You Very Much Though! :) Always Appreciate The Pointing Out Of Any Possible Mistakes Made, Always Learning! ! ! ! ! You Are An Incredibly Wonderful Poet! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! !

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 November 2016

Peacefully. Thanks for sharing.

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Rebecca Navarre 15 November 2016

Thank You! Edward, For Your Kind Response! Look Forward To Reading More Of Your Incredible Writings! ! ! Many Blessings! ! !

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