Sleepwalker Comments

What a wonderful concept!

'......................the moon It walks alone in its sleep Let it not fall in the swamp The child is so displeased'... i liked the pleasing imagery in these lines, Naseer...good piece...10

A very good classic sir, Thanks for sharing.

it s very nice and poem of great poet specially this sentsence(It walks alone in its sleep Let it not fall in the swamp) amagic sign regards

Your last lines are pure enchantment. Very appealing, Naseer. Warm regards, Sandra

There should be someone To move into our sleep And give the dreams a meaning great lines. enjoyable poem.amazing piece of work. good job. Crystal

great poem very nice words.... i like