Sleeplessness Comments

Appreciate the sentiments fellow readers and poets. Thanks for your support.

So I did! That is the most awful noise when one is awake!

you forgot to mention the tik-tik of the wall clock that seems to volume up at night.

Symptoms of insomnia beautifully versified. Congrats on poem of the Day.

A fascinating poem that majority of us could relate to. It expresses in beautiful detail the effects of insomnia. Beautifully written with great rhyme.

A wonderfully written magnificent poem, dear Ma'am Sandra. Congrats for being selected....10+++++++++++++

I really enjoyed this poem it speaks volumes and is so well penned, congratulations on poem of the day

nice rhyme, surprise and word play- with lips like butter: needs a sleeping pill….I know the feeling but found one myself.

Meaningful poem with subtle undertones.

Congratulation on being selected Sandra.

Thank you for your kind words.

A sad reality write there is nothing worse then a sleepless night.

This is a nice poetic take on the condition known as 'Sleeplessness'. A sleepless night brings ends into a morning that is worse than the night gone by. Thanks. I quote: Creepy dead mares Trample in my waking nightmares

Sorry, sleeplessness is not for me I cannot be this stressed Give me sweet slumber That when I am at my best.... Classic optimistic vie..... Lov it.

You could not sleep That silly bird wakes you up.

princess you are in sleepless sleeping come beneath the shadow of eye-leaf sleep for the years of peacefulness

Twisting and turning in bed Doesn't offer respite When you are alone Even the large empty bed is tight.....nice poetic expression. Beautiful poem.

Twisting and turning in bed! ! ! ! Sleeplessness. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

My head is all aflutter My lips like molten butter Words fall to form and shape And coil round the neck and nape ****** beautiful poem

Sorry, sleeplessness is not for me I cannot be this stressed Give me sweet slumber That when I am at my best.... beautiful