Monday, August 10, 2009

Sleepless Night - Sonnet Comments

Rating: 5.0

I cannot sleep tonight, and you know why.
You know how many weary hours I've lain
upon my bed and listened to the rain
lashing the window, and the mournful sigh
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Paul Hansford
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Marieta Maglas 23 August 2009

a wonderful sad lyric poem, you are a wonderful man, so special, with noble feelings..........10+++++

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Susan Jarvis 12 August 2009

This sonnet is so beautiful and so sad. Not until the closing lines does the reader realise the enormity of the loss. This adds a greater depth meaning to the poem, which, I might add, benefits from more than one reading. A superb poem. S :)

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