Thursday, February 4, 2010

Sleepless Comments

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As night becomes an extinction of the sun,
The battle against tiredness, has now begun.
Black clouds the sleeper, tars the skies,
Forcing the closure of disobedient eyes.
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Ian Bowen
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John Thorkild Ellison 13 February 2010

Well-constructed. I like your poems. Best wishes, John.

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Johannes Yaeger 07 February 2010

Hi I have been reading your poems and many of themhave touched my heart, I like them very much. You are a great poet.

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