Sleepless Comments

a reflective poem ripe...a special adoration...so sweet and inspiring lines... beneath your heart....thank you my dear and lovable friend....a 10 +++

good write.......................

wonderful meditative poem, lovely rhymes............10+++++++

Hey I specially loved your last two lines.. Kinda brought a smile to my face.. Not many writes rhyming poetry these days.. Yet it adds lot to the flow or the rhythm of the poem..Good.. cheers Shan

a wonderful poetry shared all rhymed from beginning to end........Thanks!

it feels i am his special sleep...lovely closing lines

Kranthi I wish you try different styles of writings This was a nice poem 10s but as a writer show us more versatility... write one poem that don't rhyme.. or one is a higher syllable count... any way good work on this piece

if sleepless nights make you write, then let it be for we need your poetry. a ten

if sleepless nights make you write, then let it be for we need your poetry. a ten

aonderful poem with a message.rhymes well too. voted10 surya

The poem rhymes well.

Rhymes at the end of sentences makes the poem