Sleepless Comments

sleeplessness and lonliness go hand in hand at times. Wonderfully written.

these moments of alienation can be so gruelling and intense that we end up meandering thr' labarynths even to find our own self!

That besets me often in your absence On these sleep deprived unpleasant nights! ..... close attachment and sudden isolation causes worry and sleeplessness...... very good descriptionof state of mind.. well done

yeah sometimes loneliness may cause sleeplessness.................but one must learn to live in solitude and face oneself then loneliness becomes comforting.........a good write.......

Good write I hope u get some sleep soon

another marvelous write Seema ji..... the time passed in loneliness is never ending time and your this master piece describes it very masterly, thanks for sharing many many many 10'sssssssss rgds asif

Mm..wonderful sleepless torture....excellent

sleepless is a torture...you have brought it out very nicely

this poem remeinds me of Eliot's poem it has such a modern smell and the beauty of this poem lies in its iamgery which is captures during a journey of teh mind.

seema.............what a wonderful write...................very well done

U' r words create a vivid picture in the minds of the reader. Nicely worded.

what more to say about an expert like you in emiting passion? lovely. shan

The imagery that comes streight from heart, the visibility of things as the invisible displays on them {tango on the table} and the {thirteenth sign of zodaic}, lonelines has no better way of expression, seema.10 plus

i wonder! ! ! ! ! ! but well written and keep writin

when ever I read your work, I get lost in words coz you write so beautifully and it felts like i'm reading my own thoughts, Seema ji its another superb write from you, thanks 'Nights, night sleepless eyes wide sleep do comes as disguise' rgds asif

A good poem that portraits the agony of monotonous loneliness...love is sweet and seperation bitter, Seema...thanks...10