Sunday, September 25, 2005

Sleepless Comments

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(for No One)


I lie sleepless
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Kareem Abdulrahim
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Laura Cummings 13 October 2005

I know you asked for my opinion but i cant think of anything to say. It's good and i like the 'grey clouds scream across the vivid moon' part, but other than that nothing shouts out at me... it's a bit too 'teenage depression' but don't just take my word for it, my poems aren't any better.

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