I know you asked for my opinion but i cant think of anything to say. It's good and i like the 'grey clouds scream
across the vivid moon' part, but other than that nothing shouts out at me... it's a bit too 'teenage depression' but don't just take my word for it, my poems aren't any better.
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I know you asked for my opinion but i cant think of anything to say. It's good and i like the 'grey clouds scream across the vivid moon' part, but other than that nothing shouts out at me... it's a bit too 'teenage depression' but don't just take my word for it, my poems aren't any better.