Monday, June 27, 2011

Sleeping Through The Rain Comments

Rating: 4.5

Happiness
Is an interesting concept
That is only half real
Mostly an illusion
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Autumn Asrai
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 27 June 2011

Nice poem composed with vivid imagery. I liked the theme very much. Kudos to your skill. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... I shall be highly obliged if you please read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1. Warmest regards Akmal

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