Sunday, April 30, 2017

Sleeping Stars Comments

Rating: 5.0

Everywhere is dark and still
With nothing much to see
But as I turn the corner
The new moon does greet me
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Alison Gaff
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Practicing Poetess 12 May 2017

Very sweet and creative. I'd never really considered that stars might sleep! Good use of personification.

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Tom Allport 30 April 2017

a poem of a twinkle less night with only to be seen the moon's silvery light? ...............well written.

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Alison Gaff

Alison Gaff

Surrey, England
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