Friday, May 15, 2015

Sleeping Pills Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ah! The life that is full of troubles
Troubles that many won't share
To share a trouble is a 'trouble' for them
Disdainful are such issues for them
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Mr. M Jamal
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Luo Zhihai 02 June 2015

A nice work, I think. I like it very mudh!

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Mr. M Jamal 02 June 2015

My pleasure :)

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Akhtar Jawad 26 May 2015

The poem describes an irony of age. Life has become so much strenuous mentally and physically that we need sleeping pills for a sleep. A great poem.....................10

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Geetha Jayakumar 25 May 2015

Beautiful poem. All the benefits of sleeping pills are presented very well. I agree with the point that sharing will often leads into trouble, as the saying...too many cooks spoil the dish. With whom we share is most important else things will move in a more complicated way. Sleeping pill is the best option, to have a peaceful sleep. I loved its presentation. Thank you.

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Mr. M Jamal 25 May 2015

Thanks for the kind comments :) Surely now a days we keep things to ourselves. :)

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Tinnie Moe 25 May 2015

let's try sharing only our good moments, and indeed no regret

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Mr. M Jamal 25 May 2015

Thank you Tinnie :)

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Sandra Feldman 24 May 2015

Original and very interesting. Well written. Speaks clearly to the reader. Enjoyed.

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Mr. M Jamal 24 May 2015

Thank you Sandra, for encouragement. :) Loved your reflection upon my poem :)

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Aisha Rehman 23 May 2015

Great thought with Great words. Loved it. All the best

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Mr. M Jamal 23 May 2015

Thanks for the appreciation :)

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Kelly Kurt 15 May 2015

Nicely written, Mr. Jamal. Thanks for sharing

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