Ah! The life that is full of troubles
Troubles that many won't share
To share a trouble is a 'trouble' for them
Disdainful are such issues for them
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The poem describes an irony of age. Life has become so much strenuous mentally and physically that we need sleeping pills for a sleep. A great poem.....................10
Beautiful poem. All the benefits of sleeping pills are presented very well. I agree with the point that sharing will often leads into trouble, as the saying...too many cooks spoil the dish. With whom we share is most important else things will move in a more complicated way. Sleeping pill is the best option, to have a peaceful sleep. I loved its presentation. Thank you.
Thanks for the kind comments :) Surely now a days we keep things to ourselves. :)
Original and very interesting. Well written. Speaks clearly to the reader. Enjoyed.
Thank you Sandra, for encouragement. :) Loved your reflection upon my poem :)
A nice work, I think. I like it very mudh!
My pleasure :)