Sunday, June 29, 2008

Sleeping Insane Comments

Rating: 3.0

How can I sleep,
The night has just begun,
How can you weep,
For the night is still so young!
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Jhanus Thanatos
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Greenwolfe 1962 05 July 2008

You might think that this poem would be complicated. But it doesn't have to be this complicated. There is much clarity to be had here, and to much more effect. This poem doesn't need many changes but it does need them desperately. I like the content here and that is my frustration. GW62

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