Sleeping Breath Comments

Sweet, I like it a lot nice work.

This is simply divine. S

goodness i love your poetry...and this is a craker

this a lovely tribute to women.. thank you for sharing it! HBH

simplicity of desire lost in dreams wanting to be made real upon waking beautiful -Eila

As always, your simple appreciation for women comes shining through in such a romantic way.........beautiful. Sincerely, Mary

This is really beautiful, Uriah, especially the second stanza. '...her sleeping breath fashions invisible kisses.' This goes beyond simply picturing a lovely woman. It is nearly mythological. Raynette

Uriah...I'm with you on this one, and my mouth is watering. Great concluding image.

OUT OF WORDS, I COULDN'T FIND A WORD THAT WOULD EXPRESS THE GREATNESS OF THIS POEM. WELL...TAKE THE ONE U LIKE BEST AND THE GREATEST. AND KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. PEACE

unspeakable joy such an emotion perhaps 28 years ago I tasted a bit of it must be more than a soul can grasp but you seem to have well expressed the feeling giving a poem which leads the way

very nice poem, Uriah.

Yeah, you sure loves them women, Uriah! May your dreams come true! (ps: Tell me how you deal with the toothpaste and are-those-dishes-clean-enough issues and stuff in the daytime. Do you have a secret there too?)

a great appreciation for the beauty of women u.