Wednesday, August 24, 2005

Sleeping Beauty Comments

Rating: 3.5

She lay safe in my arms
her eyes closed in sleep,
I gazed at her beautiful features
to me they are certainly unique.
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Gordon Whittaker
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I must be getting to know you I guessed the end. But a great poem well crafted.

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Ernestine Northover 30 September 2005

Oh, Gordon, what a lovely poem, and not what one expected of the ending. Very cleverly thought out. This reminds me of my youngest grandchild, Luke, who's one now. Sweet one. Sincerely Ernestine

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Gordon Whittaker

Gordon Whittaker

Bolton Lancashire England
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