Wednesday, August 22, 2012

Sleeping Beauty Comments

Rating: 4.8

The fair face of the earth glows softly in the darkness of infinity,
Held aloft magically in the deep swirling oceans.
The brown blanketed in rich green,
Clouds in varying colours hover on its brow.
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Dr Antony Theodore 22 August 2018

Mother Earth, how can you be so blissful? What shall emerge out of Thy womb? A monstrosity or shall the hidden divinity finally, arise? yes......the hidden divinity shall arise........ a very fine poem and very thought provoking.. tony

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Piyush Dey 13 August 2014

this was a very beautiful write. i liked its theme. it was lovely. nice write.

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C. P. Sharma 14 November 2012

A thought provoking poem, very well penned..Sleeping beauty is blissful but the vibrant illusive 'maya 'is its concubine. A balanced handling of the two brings joy in life. Whenever there is excess of either, the hidden divinity arises from within us.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 27 October 2012

A great poem indeed! Esp admird d lines, blanketed in rich green'. And d last line sums it superbly! Wow.

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Melvin Banggollay 24 October 2012

great piece madam, a master price of an eloquent tongue and a prolific mind.

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Walterrean Salley 16 October 2012

A gifted writer to see and share in such depths.

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Kelvin Owusu 07 October 2012

this is an excellent piece of poetry such a beautiful write

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Karen Sinclair 01 October 2012

Its a while since a write is so beautiful and so (how i feel) that i shed a few tears.... i am a pagan and i adore mother nature, she is who i choose to praise and these words feel like they were written just so my eyes may actually rest upon them....One word i rarely use... your newest fan...Perfect! tyvm

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Valsa George 27 September 2012

Unmindful of a seething cauldron within, Mother Earth continues to spin enigmatic and alluring! A lovely poem! !

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 16 September 2012

Mother nature and her naughty children! beautiful sleeping beauty! an interesting poem!

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Valerie Dohren 09 September 2012

Beautiful poem - love the first line of the second stanza, very insightful.

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Meera Panigrahi 09 September 2012

Two distinctly different views of reality, Paradoxes skilfully brought out. A question at the end bearing the answer too. Very good

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Allemagne Roßmann 08 September 2012

Very poignant write here

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