Tuesday, July 4, 2006

Sleeping Badly Comments

Rating: 4.8

I burst out of the stillness of sleep.
Pollute the night with a cacophony of sound.
My hard heartbeat roaring
My heavy chest heaving.
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Lauren Michaels
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Jerry Hughes 30 September 2006

Excellent Lauren, you write very well...

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Amberlee Carter 06 July 2006

How do you do that? Stunning piece of poetry, honestly. Your endings back an explosion....I adore them! Always, Amberlee

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