Sunday, June 16, 2013

Sleeping At Her Grave. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Crashing waves.
Can you feel them to today.
A hand brushing up against your tender face.
Saying don't be sad my dear boy.
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Ace Of Black Hearts
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Heather Wilkins 28 June 2013

very intense, memories hold the past so dear in our hearts.

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Vipins Puthooran 26 June 2013

memories are the seeds of the past/ great poem! ! ! !

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Patricia Grantham 25 June 2013

Memories that we hold dear seems to drift by in our memories like a cloud in the sky. We then sometimes visit our loved ones who have passed on. It is only then that we feel release within ourselves and say life goes on. A great write.

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Poetheart Morgan 20 June 2013

Here we call this Saudades! There this feeleing calls ~ longing from someone! ~ Beautiful and sad Poet

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Unwritten Soul 18 June 2013

I dont want to detailing much of my mind saying now just a short words....Lovely poem, feel so much deep emotion with this write, it has something new in color here..nice job and again it is, loved it_SOul

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David Wood 17 June 2013

Time is not a ticing clock, but a snapshot. How true. I loved this poem, a worth 10.

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R.j. Wynn 16 June 2013

Intense, I like it. Awesome write, well done, check out Stardust and thanks.

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